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My First Internet Sales Page EVER....Part 2 Posted 7 months ago
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Step 2) November 25-December 2

The Sales Page: www.SecretClassroomSpecial.com

I needed to think about content for my Sales Page. I had a deadline in my head of December 1st to get this sales page up. Joel Comm's launch of The Secret Classroom was on December 5th...I'd wanted a sales page up sooner..but that was the best timeline I could come up with for myself.

You might notice I put down the date range of my thought processes..it probably was in the back of my mind for longer than that...but I actually started writing notes between those days.

By the time I'd added bits and pieces of things I was thinking of...I barely have a solid chunk of time to do this...running around being a homemaker and mother takes some time too....

So in the end I had 3-4 pages of Brain Dump that I had to make some cohesive sense out of it.
What can be Bullet Pointed?
What can be less wordy?
What was the main things I wanted to convey?
How could I personalize it for people coming?

Also, what would be my headline?

This was my first one...and I was okay with it...

The ONLY Comprehensive 'Tell-All-One-Stop-Shop' Internet Marketing Home Study Course With Over 24+ Hours Of Killer Exclusive Secrets From TWELVE GURUS
On How To Be A Millionaire

But a fellow Internet Marketer read it...and he didn't say it in so many words...but I think he thought it SUCKED SUCKED SUCKED!!

It was on my websales page for 36 hours....he gave me some examples of what it could say...I ended up not using any of them...but I could see where his choice of words was trying to grab the person's attention.

So recently, I sat and rewrote the headline. Now it says:

My Brain Was Crammed and Mushed
After 12 MILLIONAIRE GURUS Were Done With It..
They Taught Me So Many 'Secret' Things
On How THEY Make Millions Every Year that
I Couldn't Even Go Away And Pee For One Second!

So after writing the content for the main sales page...now I had to figure out what to write about my bonuses.

The $100 off was pretty easy...but I had to write about my bonuses...

So off I went in my mind to do some more Brain Dump.


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