as with each season's turn of leaf Posted 9 months ago
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and darkness fell silent that night
one man's freedom, another's fight
such disbelief and questions rife
yet, even in death, there is life

distorted shadows ebb and flow
shrouding all as I let you go,
but out of the depths that I mourn
a renewed sense of hope is born

as with each season's turn of leaf
hands of time will encircle grief,
under rainbows of hopeful hue
I will whisper a goodbye to you.

I wrote this poem after the sudden death of my estranged father.


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Pari said (8 months ago)
I read this again today jackal.. and was once again moved. it is not a long poem but in a few verses I was extremely affected by the sorrow, the sense of loss the deep emotions, the love shining through in each well chosen word. The last verse is especially beautiful, each word holding its own special meaning leaves me with a lump in my throat. Simply beautiful.
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Jackal said (8 months ago)
Thank you kwilson.
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kwilson said (8 months ago)
Thank you for sharing. It is beautiful.
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Jackal said (8 months ago)
Thank you Minz.
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Minz said (8 months ago)
Very moving and so well written Jackal !

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